Moonlight in a Dead Sleep

okay just to lay down the ground work I feel were on the same level here for different reasons. Now, overall it looks excellent. I even like the added detail of the bulges from his hand in his pockets. Also I'm unfamiliar with what inspired him but personally it made me think of the Castlevania pretty boy thing.

So there is not much to say that could improve this one much. However there are still a COUPLE things. First the leggings around his feet could of uses a few folds as the legging folded around the shoe (shoe it's sell looks very nice by the way) just to make the shoe look less flat.

Secondly and maybe this is just me but judging from my perception of his head it's supposed to be tilted down somewhat, however the distances between his eyes to the bottom of his nose to his moth don't quite reflect that. So in that case it just looks like he has a really tiny mouth. again that could be me just interpreting the style wrong.

Finally this is less of a critique and more a praise but I like the direction you went with the mostly grey tone, with just a few colors. Gives it a sin city vibe. (that's a good thing... I think.)